Will Maiky complete his mission?
By: Cristian Carvajal, ADSO apprentice at CTTAOA, SENA.
Hello, friends!
I'm learning English and writing a story, but I don't know how it continues or how it ends. Can you help me?
"It's the year 2054. An astronaut named Maiky is on a mission to Mars. He is the first person to set foot on the red planet. Maiky is exploring a new crater when he loses his stability and slips into the deep hole. He is trapped and doesn't know how to get out of there. Maiky is scared, as he is alone on this mission. He searches for a way out but suddenly..."
"En el año 2054, un astronauta llamado Maiky está en una misión a Marte, Él es la primera persona en poner un pie en el planeta rojo. Maiky esta explorando un nuevo cráter cuando, de repente, pierde la estabilidad y resbala dentro del profundo agujero. Él está atrapado y no sabe como salir de allí. Maiky esta solo en esta misión y muy asustado. Busca la forma de salir pero, de repente....."
He sees a huge gleaming spaceship approaching. I doesn't look like it's coming from Earth though...
ResponderBorrarHi, My neme is Juan Bohorquez Marcelo I belong to caracterization archive 2627106, and here's my subsequent part of Maiky, the astronaut fella....
BorrarAfter he fell, He touches a button on his left forearm... after a few seconds a jet pack in his rear suit activates... he recovers his stability and uses the jetpack to reach the highest point of view... Maiky got amazed by the biutiful view while he realizes how far away he is from his family, friends... his wife and his kids... he was wondering for a few moments how a little floating ball in the outer space called earth could house so much beauty... but he also wondered if in that blue and green ball he calls home, someone else was interested in what Maiky was going through, so many dangers... strange things that no one else had ever seen... then, he left a tear drops by his cheek... he smiled and noticed it was time to return to the space craft... he learnt to love his home much more than he could ever learn if he never would go out this home, his loved planet erath
As the spaceship gets closer and closer, he gets to see a name on the spaceship. OMG! It's the Guardians of the Galaxy! He will have the chance to meet them, as long as they are actually planning to land on Mars... Wait a minute... He did not bring paper and pen to get their autographs! Snif snif... [img]https://static3.srcdn.com/wordpress/wp-content/uploads/2017/04/Guardians-of-the-Galaxy-2-poster.jpg[/img]
ResponderBorrarMaiky descubre rastros de antiguos habitantes marcianos en forma de ruinas [img]https://as01.epimg.net/betech/imagenes/2016/10/22/portada/1477088459_729052_1477089880_noticia_normal.jpg[/img]
ResponderBorrarHello, good afternoon, my name is Jackson Sneyder, Baptist Collazos of the 2627106 Analyst and Software Developer evidence of ancient inhabitants of Mars Maiky He finds icy water beneath the surface, a crucial find for future missions as he fights to return to the safety of his ship.[img]https://ts2.space/wp-content/uploads/2023/05/mfrack_realistic_photo_of_man_on_Mars_high_resolution_b7745a8c-0658-4181-8f20-8e7d8d114085-1024x574.jpeg[/img]
ResponderBorrarWith drinking water at his disposal, Maiky begins a search for elements that allow him to light a fire. After arduously exploring the ruins, he finds a way to do it using minerals found in the rocks. After a short time, at the light of the campfire shadows that do not belong to Maiky are glimpsed...
ResponderBorrarHello, this is Michael Arango from file 106 ADSO.
ResponderBorrarYour story is off to an exciting start! To build suspense, you could have Maiky discover an unexpected underground tunnel system. As he explores this mysterious world, he encounters strange Martian creatures that hold the key to his escape. The mission's success depends on Maiky's ability to communicate and collaborate with these creatures. Will Maiky complete his mission with their help?
I would like to think about two ways for this story. First One (Suspense): Maiky fall in that hole then he tries to keep calm and is looking for the way to get out of there so he decides to walk around and he checks everything that crosses his path but each time he advances he feels like someone is looking at him, so the fear is stronger but he continues until he gets to see a way out at the end of a long, slow, cold road. Once he gets get out of there he can discover the time has paseed too fast because his special ship is older than a few hours ago and the oxide of red planet is hard and it makes its work with the ship. Plus he looks at in the landscape other space ship from the earth but it is damaged too. So when he goes to check them he finds in the log book the space ships comes from 2154 year and that ship came to look for him and his tripulation. Even all those events he is wondering what happened with his tripulation and new tripulation. He feels helself alone and lost........ Second One(Science fiction):Maiky finds in the deep hole an peliculiar rocks but they are soft, so he saves them and when his tripulation gets him out he show them the rocks and everybody goes to take a pictures and video register of them and send them to earth. Once they received the result from Earth they are in shock because that rocks has water and microorganims and the surprise news is those organims can help to improve the Earth atmosphere. So they are agree to get down again and look for new evidences.... (Andres Vargas 2627108 ADSO group).
ResponderBorrarHello, I am Neftaly Landazuri Amaya from software analysis and development program number 2627106.
ResponderBorrarTo continue the story from . Look for a way out but suddenly…
Maiky is afraid, since he is alone in this mission. He looks for a way out, but suddenly, communication with the base on Earth is cut off. The radio in his spacesuit stops working, and the darkness of the hole closes in on him.
While recovering from the impact, Maiky realizes that her spacesuit has been damaged and her oxygen supplies are limited. Start exploring the place in search of a light source and a possible exit.
As she ventures deeper into the crater, Maiky discovers strange rock formations that emit a soft blue glow. These formations seem to hold the key to their survival. He begins to study them and finds that they can generate energy.
Maiky uses these formations to recharge her spacesuit and communicate with the base on Earth again. Discover that you have been trapped in an unexplored crater, and your situation is critical due to limited oxygen. The base sends a rescue probe at full speed.
While waiting for rescue, Maiky continues exploring the crater and discovers evidence of microbial life on Mars. Their findings excite the scientific community on Earth. Finally, the rescue probe arrives and takes him back to the safety of his ship.
The story ends with Maiky returning to Earth as a hero and with new discoveries that change the understanding of life in the universe. The mission to Mars becomes a milestone in space exploration and the scientific advancement of humanity
These guys were truly inspired to continue the story, eh? I would not finish it yet, though. There's so much Maiky can do in outer space! Oh yes, and he will! He enjoyed a lot his trip to Mars, so he goes back there a month later. To his surprise, everything has changed so very much! It's not a lonely planet anymore. Even before landing he spots what looks like a number of cities all set...
ResponderBorrarMaiky lands in a city where everything seems to have changed. After seeing ruins, deserts and craters, Maiky is surprised to find an evolved city with beings of developed capabilities, apparently a UFO race, mutated with the samples left a month ago. Maiky looks for a safe place to take refuge, when suddenly he finds a small friend, very similar to a dog but with wings that he decides to call Fetuche, from there begins the search of how it all came about, because apparently in a short time everything has changed, everything seems very strange to him because...
ResponderBorrarThank you very much
My name is Steffen Salamanca from the advertising development program 2758475.
[img]https://www.pinterest.com/maikyescalante/portada/[/img]
ResponderBorrarHi friend, I'm John Sharp from file 2526108 software analysis and development.
Here's a suggestion:
"Maiky is scared, as he is alone on this mission. He searches for a way out but suddenly hears a faint, mysterious humming sound echoing from the depths of the crater. Curious, he cautiously follows the sound through a dark tunnel. As he ventures deeper, he begins to see peculiar, phosphorescent markings on the cave walls, illuminating his path.
The humming grows louder and more distinct as he moves forward. Maiky finally reaches a vast underground chamber, and to his astonishment, he discovers an ancient, alien technology hidden within. It appears to be an alien spacecraft, buried beneath the Martian surface for millennia.
With no way to contact Earth and the spacecraft inoperative, Maiky decides to explore further. He uncovers a holographic diary left behind by the Martian civilization, which had mysteriously disappeared eons ago. The diary contains crucial information about the planet's history, culture, and perhaps a way to return to the surface.
As Maiky delves deeper into the Martian civilization's history, he starts to piece together the mysteries of their disappearance. He realizes that there may be a way to use the ancient technology to signal Earth for rescue, but it won't be easy. Maiky's mission to Mars has suddenly turned into a quest to unlock the secrets of the planet and find a way back home, with the fate of Martian history in his hands."
You can continue from here, exploring the challenges Maiky faces and the discoveries he makes.
Hello everyone! My name is Natalia Muñoz Serna. I study ADSO at SENA with ficha 2726108. Suddenly, he hears a strange sound. When he looks to the sky, he sees the rover "Perseverance," a robot that was sent a few years before him. It's there so that its NASA partners can keep an eye on Maiky, who is in trouble. "Perseverance" assists him in escaping through a rope the robot uses for anchoring in case of a storm. Maiky is very thankful to "Perseverance." He is close to completing his mission, and his partners can help him.
ResponderBorrarHello, my name is Fhanor Mina, I am in the Software Analysis and Development Program, my student number is 2627108.
ResponderBorrar….. he searches for a way out but suddenly he remembers that there is no gravity outside of earth and that he can float if he relaxes his body. Maiky started breathing deeper and slower and the fall losses speed, he starts floating and moving his arms as if he was swimming in the air to get out of the crate. He reaches the surface and starts floating around, exploring, learning and understanding the planet Mars.
He realizes that he has fallen into a portal where he can see different dimensions and enter new worlds. At this point, she discovers that there are other planets that, in addition to Earth, have life and vegetation, but on these there are strange beings never seen before. He is absorbed by one of these planets and Maiky believes it is the end, when she feels that they are the last seconds of his life she suddenly wakes up and finds herself at the same point where his mission began. Maiky feels like a lot of time has passed, she remembers adventures and new discoveries, but she doesn't know if everything was the product of a dream or she really lived everything she remembers. (Jairo Morales, software analysis and development student. 2627108 Group.)
ResponderBorrarI was ready to scream, when my sister screamed at me; you're not going to get up; It's ten o'clock.
ResponderBorrarI had taken the day to go to work; because the day before was very hard for me in the company and at night preparing evidence for Training Program Advertising.
Hello, my name is Francisco Emilio Sanchez Montoya file 2758476 Training Program Advertising
Este comentario ha sido eliminado por el autor.
ResponderBorrarHello everyone, my name is José Álvaro Santos Mantilla, ADSO trainee, file 2627106. Maiky continued to explore the cave. Suddenly, he saw something that blew his mind. In the center of the cave, there was a metal structure. The structure was large and complex, and Maiky couldn't believe her eyes.
BorrarMaiky walked over to the structure and examined it. It was made of an unknown metal. Maiky had no idea what it was, but it was clear that it was something important.
Maiky was excited. He had made an incredible discovery. He was the first person to find something like this on Mars.
Maiky began photographing the structure. He wanted to document his discovery so the world would know.
After taking some photos, Maiky decided to return to her spaceship. He had to inform his team of what he had found.
Maiky emerged from the cave and headed for his spaceship. I was tired, but I was excited about what I had discovered.
In the next chapter, Maiky will return to her spaceship and inform her team of her discovery. The team will be excited by the news, but they will also be concerned about Maiky's safety.
Maiky will have to convince his team that the structure is safe. You'll also need to find a way to study the structure without jeopardizing your own safety.
Maiky's discovery could change the course of history. It is possible that the structure is of extraterrestrial origin, and that it contains valuable information about the history of the universe.
Good morning, I am Francisco Alexis García Rodríguez from the Software Analysis and Development program, file 2627108.
BorrarSuddenly, a huge creature emerges from the crater, swallows the astronaut and transports him to a completely different galaxy. Here you must find a way back, but the inhabitants do not know the creature. After many years, a group is formed that has been through the same thing, but no solutions emerge due to the underdeveloped technology of the galaxy. Over time, our astronaut adapts and forms a family in his new world, much like the others. [imp]https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/rpg-rise-of-the-titans/images/7/71/EGxDoK3XYAAOnOI.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20200531184115&path-prefix=pt-br[/img]
Hello my name is Jose fernando Mera Lopez, i am a student of the software analysis and development group 2627106. in his new life with his family our astronaut, in one of his missions, discover some clues about another group, who was investigating a way to return to his galaxy, and then realizes that in this new galaxy there is a world government conspiracy, and they want to keep the astrinaut in that galaxy to investigate about travel through galaxies.
Borrar[img]https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/rpg-rise-of-the-titans/images/7/71/EGxDoK3XYAAOnOI.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20200531184115&path-prefix=pt-br[/img]
BorrarMy name is Jaime Eduardo Sanchez Ayala from group 2627106 Analysis and Software Development.
ResponderBorrarFrom the frustration of seeing what the whole operation is falling down gave him a bad temper and began to kick everything he found, in this despero broke a block of ice and began to leave a lot of water and the hole was filled and thus could leave, he went to the ship and started to return to earth.
ResponderBorrarGood evening, my name is Daniel Sanchez, a student of Analysis and Software Development (ADSO) ID 2627108.
Remember his rigorous training on Earth and his mentor, who explained to him how to get out of this situation if he ever found himself in it. So, Maiky uses the booster on his suit to propel himself out of the hole, a risky feat since the booster consumes the CO₂ he needs to breathe on that planet. Desperately, he manages to escape the hole and with the last bit of oxygen he has left, he reaches the ship, where he refills his oxygen, rests, and recalls that he is not alone because he carries within him every teaching of his mentor. Mike is ready to continue!.
Maiky realized that something or someone was walking along the top of the hole. but he could not see because everything on Mars at that time was very dark, and he decided to scream a lot and look for anything that would help him escape through that hole, but something strange happened, they lowered a rope and Maiky climbed scared and when he reached the top Did not see anyone. two minutes later a stone was directly above his head and he woke up in a large laboratory with many big and strange aliens, he couldn't know what was happening and one of those aliens entered that room and Maikly saw many dead human bodies, and a voice He said this is your turn, you are going to another life and with many tools they killed him, he could not escape and that was his sad end.
ResponderBorrarHey guys, good evening. I am Jennifer Julieth Mrtinez Sabogal and I am studying Analysis and Software Development in group 2717107. I am going to continue with the strory. So, les get started. Maiky realized that something or someone was walking along the top of the hole. but he could not see because everything on Mars at that time was very dark, and he decided to scream a lot and look for anything that would help him escape through that hole, but something strange happened, they lowered a rope and Maiky climbed scared and when he reached the top Did not see anyone. two minutes later a stone was directly above his head and he woke up in a large laboratory with many big and strange aliens, he couldn't know what was happening and one of those aliens entered that room and Maikly saw many dead human bodies, and a voice He said this is your turn, you are going to another life and with many tools they killed him, he could not escape and that was his sad end.
ResponderBorrarHello, my name is Jhon Sebastian Mendoza Cruz, im study analisys an development of software, from file 2627109, finds a mysterious tunnel leading deeper into Mars. Intrigued, he cautiously follows it, discovering an underground chamber filled with ancient Martian artifacts. As he examines the relics, Maiky realizes that he might not be alone after all. This unexpected turn of events brings a mix of fear and excitement, as he contemplates the mysteries hidden beneath the Martian surface. The mission takes an unforeseen twist, opening doors to new possibilities and challenges for Maiky in the uncharted depths of the red planet.
ResponderBorrarHi i am Sebastian Mesa Calle I am studying analisys an development of software#file 2627106 and i think that After he fell into the hole, he discovered a hidden world teeming with unique creatures. Among them were butterflies adorned with Japanese letters, creating an enchanting and mysterious atmosphere. Initially, he entertained the notion of stumbling upon a secret base, fueled by the unusual discovery of these Japanese-inspired butterflies.
ResponderBorrarAs time passed, the mystery deepened. Years later, three Japanese individuals attempted to land on Mars, sparking curiosity and speculation. However, after their initial attempt, they mysteriously vanished and were never heard from again. The connection between the strange creatures and the enigmatic Japanese visitors added an extra layer of intrigue to the unfolding narrative. Little did he know that this unexpected journey would lead to even more captivating discoveries in the uncharted realm beneath the surface of Mars.
(continuing the story) Suddenly, Maiky notices a faint glow emanating from the crater wall. Investigating further, he discovers a hidden passageway leading to a subway Martian cave. Relieved, he finds ancient inscriptions on the cave walls, revealing a map to the surface. With new hope, Maiky follows the guide and eventually emerges onto the rugged terrain of Mars. Grateful for the unexpected discovery, he resumes his historic mission, now armed with knowledge of Mars' secrets.
ResponderBorrarJader Ramirez Llorente
File 2627109
Software Analysis and Development
SENA
Hello, my name is Jorge Amando Toloza, File #2627106, and I'm enrolled in the Software Analysis and Design Program, in this chapter Discovering the Martian underground city, Maiky learns about the rich history of an ancient civilization and its links with the earth. Taking new knowledge, she records her history and plans to share it with humanity. As she prepares to leave, a holographic message reveals that Earth had sent a secret team of archaeologists years ago. They invite Maiky to join them in uncovering the mysteries of Mars, setting the stage for a collaborative effort that could reshape humanity's understanding of the cosmos.
ResponderBorrarMaiky is very excited to return to earth, but not for so long. He has been discovering this planet all this time and in the end he decide to stay, that's what he wants. In any case so many years have passed on Earth that none of his loved ones are alive. He asks to the team to publish all the discovers and ask for support to keep his research for the rest of his life.
ResponderBorrarSorry, I´m Katherine Ortega, from the file 106. Thanks
BorrarHello My name is Edinson Galvis Ochoa from course number 2627107.
BorrarHe is looking for a way out but suddenly .......... Maiki sees how the space rocks are coming towards him at high speed, he tries desperately to free himself without success, he closes his eyes and prepares for the worst... many meteors fall and hit around the crater where Maiki was. In a stroke of luck a large meteorite manages to destroy most of the crater freeing him and without understanding what has happened to him, he runs to a safer place.
Hello Professor My name is Edinson Galvis Ochoa of the course number 2627107, with this publication I complete the objective of this evidence.
ResponderBorrarHe is looking for a way out but suddenly .......... Maiki sees how the space rocks are coming towards him at high speed, he tries desperately to free himself without success, he closes his eyes and prepares for the worst... many meteors fall and hit around the crater where Maiki was. In a stroke of luck a large meteorite manages to destroy most of the crater freeing him and without understanding what has happened to him, he runs to a safer place.